2. UNFRIENDLY EXPRESSION

Better. A crisp collared shirt in place of the white t-shirt has upped the professionalism of this headshot.

But - how about that expression? It still doesn't feel very approachable, does it? He could smile a little.

Does he look confident? Hands held in front of you tend to look protective - and therefore, vulnerable and a bit insecure. This is not a powerful post. We can do better still.